my favourite (comedy) blog entries - your comments, pls

hi guys, here's just a list of my favourite blog entries - pls read them, and give me your comments: does it make sense to you? is it funny? does it make you laugh?.. cry?.. spit?.. shit#?.. xxx?... whatever?... Welcome one and all, comments, and critiques.
# "shit" is just the normal, everyday word for "faeces," or "excrement," ok? so dont get all worked up

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Blogger Symbol HaHaa-ed:

I think you've got some good things to say in your shot stories, posts or scripts (they can go every which way), but I see them more as meaingful insights, rather then stand up material.

They could be worked into becoming stand up material, but you'll have to through them, shorten and simplify the sentences (comedy is better read fast) and (for heavens sake) don't give away the punchline of the joke (in democrisis, for instance) before you've even started telling the joke.

I mean, I know that the title of the joke wouldn't be told when your on stage, but how am I supposed to judge how funny that punch line is, when I've already heard it at the begining of the joke?

You can't appreciate a punchline unless it catches you by surprise.

Keep working at it, though, it's all got potential.

Friday, August 20, 2004 3:21:00 PM  
Blogger Jeff! Lim HaHaa-ed:

thanks! yah - guess i didnt think about that for the punchline.. See, i kinda wanted something that would be representative, see... (u know, "subject"). But i getcha - thanks for the constructive comments...

Friday, August 20, 2004 3:52:00 PM  
Blogger Jeff! Lim HaHaa-ed:

... and the encouragement as well.

Friday, August 20, 2004 3:53:00 PM  

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